This was very cool. I confess that starting at the shooting booth scene, I was too unsettled by how slightly off everything was to completely enjoy the sweetness of teenage Cam & John at the fair. But I love how subtle all that off-ness was, how you didn't spell everything out. You maintained the suspense throughout very well; I was wondering what was really going on up until the end.

And I loved John in this -- his bits of backstory, that his dreamworld is being at a fair with Cam (with team there too!), his clear affection for Cam throughout, and his decision to go back to the real world & the real Cam at the end.