Well, I guess some of the offness was a little more obvious, like the interjected bits of flying memories, but especially when it came to the fact that the people he was encountering at the fair were team, I thought that was really subtly done. Took me a while to catch on.

Oh, and I friended your LJ because I generally love your fic and feel like I miss it sometimes if I rely solely on the SGA newsletter. :)