Oh, this is wonderful! I really believe this threesome, the caring and friendship, Cam assuming John/Teyla and Teyla assuming John/Cam, and finally the matter-of-fact way Teyla initiates the sex. Cole and his family are also great--I especially like Cole hugging Cam and remembering Antarctica.

Really really like that Athosians don't have pair bonds like most Earthers do, and that Kanaan hasn't been written out of the equation.

non-pilot jumper pilots, like Stackhouse
Only a minor quibble, but Stackhouse doesn't have the ATA gene. Maybe use Rivers instead?