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evening_spirit ([personal profile] evening_spirit) wrote in [personal profile] bluflamingo 2011-10-09 06:48 pm (UTC)

Wonderful story! Found it via [personal profile] saphirablue's rec, just thought I'd mention.

I think you captured Steve's SEAL stubbornness wonderfully and the interaction between him and Cath was full of tension and . . . something more. A plausible peek into the beginning of their relationship.

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