Judy leaned down and kissed her, tongue sliding over Liz’s, her hands curling back into Liz’s hair where it tangled against her bare shoulders. “I want to with you too. But maybe we should go on a date first or something.”
They went to an anti-war debate at the union instead.
“I think if the right people were in power, things would change,” Liz said.
And this was very, very nice foreshadowing; it explains Elizabeth's fight, her struggle despite an obviously non-confrontational personality, see also the very first scene in your story: well done!
Teyla sighed. “I had thought so,” she said, and Elizabeth thought, for the first time since she’d bumped into Judy Santos in the music rooms, I know you. You’re like me.
Yes. Too few stories explore their connection. Lovely.
Really enjoyed this story--what a cool look at Elizabeth, sense-making and a little sad. Thank you!
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Judy leaned down and kissed her, tongue sliding over Liz’s, her hands curling back into Liz’s hair where it tangled against her bare shoulders. “I want to with you too. But maybe we should go on a date first or something.”
They went to an anti-war debate at the union instead.
“I think if the right people were in power, things would change,” Liz said.
And this was very, very nice foreshadowing; it explains Elizabeth's fight, her struggle despite an obviously non-confrontational personality, see also the very first scene in your story: well done!
Teyla sighed. “I had thought so,” she said, and Elizabeth thought, for the first time since she’d bumped into Judy Santos in the music rooms, I know you. You’re like me.
Yes. Too few stories explore their connection. Lovely.
Really enjoyed this story--what a cool look at Elizabeth, sense-making and a little sad. Thank you!