wow. this is an awesome, plotty, tense story - you translate the people from the show very nicely (great to see Mitchell and Lorne, loved Weir to pieces) while bringing us really quickly and easily into this whole AU. I really felt pulled along by it, pulled in by it, and really convinced by this John, and this Rodney - both of them suspicious and anxious and in love almost against their will. Brilliant piece, great action, lovely tone.