I think the hint that David wonders if there's something more between them is very subtle in yours, but that it works best that way, because it's quite explicit in mine that Colby does want something more. And, yeah, definitely something that will never ever be spoken of (unless they're in a near death crisis or very very drunk. Maybe both).

I can't believe I didn't figure out the other crossovers - I've seen every one of those shows! Colby/Lorne totally works - bergann wrote them for lgbtfest, it's a great fic!

You know, now I kind of want to write 5 crossovers Colby Granger was never in, using the five from your fic... Actually, would you mind if I did? No problem if you'd rather I didn't, but I'm totally intrigued by the potential :)