Wow, love "Last Cigarette" - you really captured the kind of frozen desperation/ weariness/ grief of the two of them at the front line of a terrible war. It nicely parallels Evan's emotional state in Two Weeks. I can hope that their brief time together helped them both, the way Cam is later able to help Evan. (Cuz otherwise I'm just hurting so much for both of them!)

eeee! So happy to get a glimpse of John & Cam in the future of Return'verse.

"Still With Me" - oh, boys! John reminds me of a feral cat, wanting to come in to the warmth but not sure of his welcome. Kinda twitchy and wary. And there's Cam, so patient, laying out the trail of cat food to entice him in. Not pushing too hard, cuz he knows that'll just scare him away.

"Say Goodnight" - Love Cadman, and the camaraderie she has w/ Evan. & love the last two lines!