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bluflamingo) wrote2009-12-05 06:26 pm
bluflamingo) wrote2009-12-05 06:26 pm
Help!
He looks around, and there’s the Ferris wheel, and right, he was looking for Cam, when he bumped into him
How do I rephrase this to get rid of 'he bumped into him'? He being John and him being Cam. I tried 'when John bumped into him,' and 'when he bumped into Cam,' and even 'the other boy,' but none of them sound right and I'm stuck. Help!
How do I rephrase this to get rid of 'he bumped into him'? He being John and him being Cam. I tried 'when John bumped into him,' and 'when he bumped into Cam,' and even 'the other boy,' but none of them sound right and I'm stuck. Help!
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