Seeking: beta-reader

[bluflamingo]

Would anyone be able to read through my SGA Reverse Bang fic? It's about 11,000 words, John/Cam, post-season 5, Dysfunction-verse, heavy on the John/Keller friendship.

If possible, I'd really like it back by the end of this week.

Comments

[broms_lullaby]

I could take a look at it. What are you looking for specifically?

[bluflamingo]

Mainly, does it make sense, is it in character, anything glaringly wrong? Also, is the ending too abrupt, which is the big thing I'm obsessing over at the moment :)

Are you okay to leave your email below, or do you want to PM it to me? Thank you!

[tesserae]

I can look at it if you like; I've got time over the next couple of days.

[bluflamingo]

Thank you (and apologies for not replying sooner, my home internet is down). Could you let me have your email address please?

[tesserae]

No problem; I figured you got busy. The email is tesserae4405 [at] yahoo.com.