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I was clearing out my files today, and I came upon this, that I wrote a while ago. I've no idea if it works or not, or if it seems finished, because the back-story is so clear in my head that I can't tell if it's clear or not. If that made any sense :)

So, any feedback gratefully received, even if you're telling me it's total nonsense and doesn't make any sense!

( Anonymous story... any ideas? )

And in other news... went to Alton Towers yesterday with a group of students, and froze to death. What happened to summer?!? One of them asked me why I wanted to leave them... and it's very hard to explain that I love them and don't want to leave them, but that I can't actually stand the management and the school. But it's nice to know they'll miss me anyway... well, till the new teacher comes :)