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apocalypse_kree fic. I can see exactly how it should be in my head, but it's like there's a breakdown somewhere between the picture in my head and the words on my screen. It's incredibly frustrating, because I *like* the story in my head, it totally works, and the one on the screen isn't *right*.
That said, would someone be willing to have a look at it for me, probably in a couple of days? Assuming I don't trash the whole thing before then, of course. It's Cam/John, needless to say :)
apocalypse_kree fic. I can see exactly how it should be in my head, but it's like there's a breakdown somewhere between the picture in my head and the words on my screen. It's incredibly frustrating, because I *like* the story in my head, it totally works, and the one on the screen isn't *right*.That said, would someone be willing to have a look at it for me, probably in a couple of days? Assuming I don't trash the whole thing before then, of course. It's Cam/John, needless to say :)
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Hey, feedback/praise is important too. One of the biggest problems for me in writing John/Cam fic (or even gen fic) is how little feedback I get in comparison to the McSheppers. ('Course, that could be a comment on the quality of my writing rather than my choice of pairing, but pairings do seem to matter.)
Have you seen my Big List of John/Cam Fic? There might be something on there you haven't read, to tide you over for a bit. Or if you know of something I've missed, please let me know.